Good job! There's a lot of good character acting during all the dialogue. I think the initial cemetery slap looks especially good. A couple thoughts might be to lower the ambient noise in the car a little and the one motion where he puts his hand on the guy's shoulder (after he says you were too young to remember) happens a little fast. Other than that it looks great.
Great job, your animation has great movements, and its on time for the show. Two things worth going back to would be the first shot of the picture, I would either draw it by hand to get a sketchbook look or if you have time try to paint a old Hollywood style movie poster. Second would be backgrounds, mostly I would show a cemetery, so the cemetery slap is not just being pulled out of the blue.
The 2 pan shots of the beginning is not strong enough, hope to have the old photograph look on those two shots; and apply the old film effect to your piece, make it nicer <3
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ReplyDeleteHey cool stuff. Maybe add like moving holds in that beginning description dealie.
ReplyDeletejust work on background in the beginning
ReplyDeleteI like this i think it can use moving holds
ReplyDeleteGood job! There's a lot of good character acting during all the dialogue. I think the initial cemetery slap looks especially good. A couple thoughts might be to lower the ambient noise in the car a little and the one motion where he puts his hand on the guy's shoulder (after he says you were too young to remember) happens a little fast. Other than that it looks great.
ReplyDeleteGreat job, your animation has great movements, and its on time for the show. Two things worth going back to would be the first shot of the picture, I would either draw it by hand to get a sketchbook look or if you have time try to paint a old Hollywood style movie poster. Second would be backgrounds, mostly I would show a cemetery, so the cemetery slap is not just being pulled out of the blue.
ReplyDeletemaybe some radio music from the time era for background music?
ReplyDeleteit looks very good!
The 2 pan shots of the beginning is not strong enough,
ReplyDeletehope to have the old photograph look on those two shots;
and apply the old film effect to your piece, make it nicer <3
great comments!
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